An explanation of my comments and feedback:
- Your rough draft was due on Monday. Anyone who sent it to efatlanta@gmail.com should have received my feedback by now.
- I tended to put my feedback in ALL CAPS. Just to make sure you would see it!
- I also used
strikethroughto tell you what to erase. - And sometimes I put suggestions (in parentheses)
Some reminders:
Here is your format:
Heading
(goes on top left)
Your Name
Miss Emily Clune
AYP
Level (B1-3 or B2-3)
14 October 2012
Title
(goes under the heading, center aligned)
example titles:
The Ups and Downs of (Famous Person)
The Achievements and Challenges of (Famous Person)
(Famous Person): His/Her Ups and Downs
(Famous Person): His/Her Achievements and Challenges
Introduction (1 paragraph):
Tell who your person is, why they're important, what they achieved.
Body (2-4 paragraphs):
Give a specific achievement in detail, and a specific challenge in detail.
How did they become successful?
Did your person overcome the downs? How?
Conclusion (1 paragraph):
Overall, is your person better known for their achievements or their challenges?
What is the person's legacy?
Your essay should be 2 pages. It may not exceed 3 pages. Please double space and use size 12 font, Times New Roman.
At the end include a Works Cited in MLA format with the biography you read. Here is how to do that: http://citationmachine.net/index2.php?reqstyleid=1&newstyle=1&stylebox=1
Then copy and paste the citation! EASY!
Please send your FINAL VERSION of the essay as a Word document, or a google doc to efatlanta@gmail.com by midnight on Sunday.
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